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  • Robert M Robert M Sep 29, 2011 11:51 Flag

    if your not a manc we dont want you

    SL4YER, in your first sentence the second comma shouldn't be there and the sentence should either finish with a full stop or you should reformulate it into a proper question.

    In the second sentence you have incorrect capitalisation of "Your Parents" and the comma should be a full stop.

    3/10. Could do better.